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Post by Chase Connors on Jun 2, 2012 10:04:01 GMT
So... my 6 year old cousin has been falling behind in her English as school and her reading and writing hasn't been so good lately. I've just managed to convince her to do some writing. What do you guys think? Not bad for a 6 year old! Once upon a time there were two girls called Lily and Denise and they were picking some flowers outside a village and they were all alone. They were all alone because they didn't have any family. The sky was turning grey and then an evil witch was flying on a dragon. The dragon was green. The dragon was fierce and can breathe fire. The girls were sad and they wished they had a family and they started to cry. They dropped the basket. The witch laughed at them in a evil way. Then two people found them and the witch was screaming away. The two girls were happy again and they got a family. They lived happily ever after. The Dragon PoemThe dragons are fierce. The dragons are as evil as a vampire. The dragons can breathe fire out of their nostrils. The dragons scales are red hot. The dragons have evil eyes which are red. The dragons can fly very high. The dragons teeth are as pointy as a broken glass. The dragons tails are as strong as metal. The dragons claws are as sharp as a crystal. The dragons roars are as loud as a lions roar. The dragons eat anything that is made out of meat. The dragons scales are as rough as old wood. The dragons are magic so they can fly. The dragons fly very fast. The dragons can be seen at a castle. The dragons are very strong, even stronger than anyone.
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Post by quof on Jun 3, 2012 0:06:27 GMT
Ahh, i think its cute, and she's only six. I was actually really impressed with some of those Dragon similes...
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